Free Writing

Kolton did not write this. Im looking forward to grandparents day. I like grandparents day because of all of the fun activities we do in class with each other. This year I think it's going to be different. I think were going to have the same sort of classes just shorter with not many fun activities in it like last year. Talking to all of our teachers so far about Grand Parents Day they've all said they are just going to have the same thing as regular class, except for math, Ms. Rice is letting us play a math game with cards. I guess it's still going to be fun considering the fact that we have a half day, even though it's not really half it's only 1 or 2 less hours. I just finished talking about what I think about Grand Parents Day for Free writing goodbye.

Essay 13

          Do you believe in true love. Well I believe it happens only once in a lifetime to certain people. I believe to find your true love you will both have to have different personalities, just like Cinderella and Prince Charming. They both show different personalities which in my eyes is the reason they are in so much love.    
             
           I imagine myself having love that builds up and up. I see the future having a basic relationship that keeps getting bigger and stronger. I believe that my love would not be love at first sight but a relationship that grows. I see myself with somebody that is easy to agree with so it's not hard to make our relationship last longer. I believe that I would like my partner to share the same personalities so its easier to get along with her more than a usual relationship. I think our whole relationship would depend on how much reflection we give each other showing love through our personality. To me I see that our whole relationship would be based on how much we show for each other and give. I strongly believe having a healthy relationship is the hammer to building love. 

          When I think of true love I think of the media. The movie Cinderella gives me the hint of true love. Cinderella and her prince charming find true love at first sight. The moment Prince Charming saw Cinderella, he immediately thought he had to have her which was a big love part of the moment. Cinderellas and Prince Charming's love is so powerful that not even an evil godmother and two stepsisters can brake it. There love for each other is too strong to brake it.  No matter what happens nobody can cut through there love, that is so strong it's almost magical. There love will go on and on and that is the reason I think there my thought of true love.
      
          After talking about true love I noticed how it was hard to write this essay because I've never had real love. That didn't stop me though while I was writing this I actually found real love from my neighbors Erin and Drew. Erin and Drew are always laughing with each other and never seem to be in a negative mood by themselves. And Andrew and Drew never argue and they just show so mush love through eachother.

Sonnet

Friends are the best to me I see

They make me always start to laugh

There’s no friends that can be s good as mine can be

The things that make me laugh is Alan’s imaginary staff

My friends might even watch some glee

Daniel might even help me build a math graph

My friends are the best and now I see

Essay 11

                                         Essay 11

                             Teenager struggles in 2011

                           An Essay By: Kolton Sebastian

                               Teacher: Mr. Salsich

                             Wednesday, March 2011

       TS Teenagers all over the world are getting more homework every year. It's true most kids spend hours doing homework. We teenagers think its too much for us to do, which it is. The homework is also getting a lot harder over the past couple years.
          TS Teenagers in 2011 are struggling getting all of their homework done. SD The teenagers are getting a humungous amount homework in school all over the world. CM Since they’re getting too much homework, they have to stay up late to get it all finished. CM Teenagers don’t like getting lots of homework because they have to stay up to late to finish it all. SD The homework for teenagers has gotten a lot harder for them. CM Over the years teenagers are starting to struggle with all of their homework because it’s too hard and too much. CM A lot of the teenagers seem to get stressed because of the homework. SD Since the kids are getting too much homework they don’t have any time for fun. CM Most teenagers get home from school and get right to work but when they’re done they have no time for watching TV or playing a board game. CM Even over the weekend they have to do lots of homework, which makes their weekend almost have no point. CS Most of the teenagers in 2011 are being strangled by having so much homework.

          TS Being a teenager is tough because of the disability (ADHD) I have- that makes me hyper and makes it hard for me to pay attention - but also makes me say stuff that i wouldn't say if I did take my medicine. SD I am always feel ebullient about getting into trouble which I hate feeling like. CM I seem to get in trouble a lot in my teen years, but its difficult for me to stay out of trouble. CM I don’t try to be bad but I just can't handle it my (ADHD) puts me in the place to be bad. SD Having ADHD is hard for me to deal with. CM In class I seem to get distracted very easier than other people because of my disability, which causes me to have to really try to pay attention. CM It’s as if I can’t even control myself from laughter or saying something abnotcious. CS Having ADHD in my teenage years is a challenge for me but I get through it.
             Do you think teenagers should have this much homework, well I don't? It's true I spend up to hours doing homework almost every night, which I think isn't fair. It doesn't matter worth arguing over though because we all have to do it. It's not always you thats ringing you down, sometimes it could be something in you that brings you down (ADHD).




                     1. I am going to try to work on making different themes when I write rather than 1.
                     2. My most strong point I see in this essay is how truthfully I spoke about what ADHD makes me do.
                     3. My week point that I see is that some of my sentences repeat themselves with the next sentence.
                     4. I would give myself a B-, because I spent a good amount of time on this essay and I also have all of the assignment I need for this essay.